Sweaty feet made railing sloppy.I looked back to life, saw traffic jam.
I jumped.
The blades of wind ripped my skin.My flesh bare.
Death promised more than life.
Suddenly ropes of life tightened over my chest.
A jerk!!
I was flying back to life.Death disappointed.
My first Bungee Jump from Howrah Bridge.
26 comments:
once again, a great way of telling!! u know, i started reading it thinking maybe the narrator was dying. but it ended so unexpectedly!! loved it man.... i loved ur other story too, u know, abt that girl trina but i guess my comment didnt publish there. so i am saying it here, loved that too!!!! awesome job, man!!!!!
innovative buddy :D
@Bliss: yea...da protagonist was me...so decided not to kill myself 2 soon... :P
thnk u fr those nice words... :)
@ blunt edges: thnkx bro.... :DD
Tht was good....
"Death promised more than life"....
Excellent work...:)
@Lakshmi: thnkxx...yea dat was my fav line too...and to a gr8 extent quite true..isnt it!! :)
Yeah... its true.. to an extent... the only problem is U need a lot of courage to live, even more than u need to die.. choosing to die is relatively easy.. thts wat my mother always told me... :)
wowiee nice man.... nice piece of innovative scribble...
dint expect such an end at'll
great
@Lakshmi: living is mighty tough...but i guess its sumthing we all need to do...and wen we r tired...we all can just bungee jump a bit!!! :P
@Simba: hey nice name u hav....i beliv its ur first comment on my blog...so welcome...
well to say da story was inspired by a 50:50 ad long time ago wich had a bong middle age man sayin "bungee jumpin frm howrah bridge"...
it got struck in my mind...
if i find da ad...i will post its youtube link!!
keep visitin!!
Hey BF,
Nice innovative concept man. #Death promised more than life# Patent this line.
@ BU :
yeah man my first time here...bungee jumping was a nice take on it.... yeah do post the video wen ever u can...
and nice blog u have....kudos....
thanks for the name... m thinking of even patenting it... what say ????
:P :D :)
wow! i like
@Unsure ascetic: thnk u man!!! yea...i cn get dis line copyrighted...den ppl will pay me fr using dis line...woohoo...
@Simba:yea do patent ur name...and morever change ur original name 2 dis...
so next time u say ur name in sum interview and stuff...i m sure dey will be confused fr 2-3 mins abt wat 2 ask u next!!!
@Orange: glad u like!! and keep likin...and if u not like den u can always dislike...
welcome!!!
YO! BAck again to fight!!! lol..:P Well tell u what..u have quite clearly played with words here.
death promised more than life
Suddenly ropes of life tightened my chest...
trust me it gave a bare inkling of what was to be expected.And u know what i thought! suicide..lol..the "chest" word ruined my thoughts though!
Nice work..:)
@Madhu: boxing Gloves check!!...mask check!!...red boxer underwear check!!..yea am ready!!
and i was wondering fr 3 days hav u gone gandhigiri or wat!! silly me!!
blame it on my parents dey gave me dictionary to play wid rather dan toys..hence i end up playin wid words!! :P
well da "inkling" was not given by me..its always dere...y u think ppl luvs bungee jumpin or for dat matter para gliding and stuff...only fr da matter dat dey can show da birdie to death on its face!!
but da fact is ppl thinks abt suicide more dan adventure sports...so u made da obvious guess gal!!
btw call me chauvinist!! but da protagonist was me and i checkd twice in mirror!! its chest fr me!! :P :D
"Death Promised more than life"
that was a fantastic line.
Cool. Well written! :)
Very vivid. Nice :)
@Gkam: hey thnkx!!! and welcome 2 my blog!! :)
@Nikki:yea...it was hard to limit it widin 55 words and still keep it metaphorical!! :)
nice one mahn.. btw do they allow bungee jumpin from howrah?? isnt bungee jumpin more about fear rather than death.. n its not abt fera of death either..
Nice :)
@Vishnu: nah!! dey arrest u if u try to bungee jump...or even suicide...sad na!!
wat i felt is ppls liking wid such adventure sport is coz dey can go close to death...show death da birdie...and come back....its our eternal quest to conquer death dat makes it an adventure...
@Shanu- thnk u vry much!!
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