tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post957462927679700841..comments2023-06-16T17:07:08.031+05:30Comments on Tears n' Rain: My New Queenbuckingfastardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05288515789173570238noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-10985751218083951392011-06-17T16:51:55.800+05:302011-06-17T16:51:55.800+05:30I like how you think. And how you can always put i...I like how you think. And how you can always put into words the images in your head. Keep writing. Please.TurbulentMindhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07657922175632101396noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-21258672880486628102011-04-11T01:37:26.449+05:302011-04-11T01:37:26.449+05:30Oh! Awesome description!!Oh! Awesome description!!Tripthi Battapadihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16971512779065021970noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-37208472036477798012011-03-22T23:45:15.513+05:302011-03-22T23:45:15.513+05:30@sandip: welcome to the blog...yes...boldness is s...@sandip: welcome to the blog...yes...boldness is surely my forte...thats why i m anonymous :P<br /><br />and i m kind at heart...cant just keep the food out of reach...so i prefer tying and opening my own knots<br /><br />thanks a lot for the lovely words and surely will see u around!!buckingfastardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05288515789173570238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-37165424520328647132011-03-22T23:41:49.242+05:302011-03-22T23:41:49.242+05:30@bondgal:haha!! yes quite so...meant to be double ...@bondgal:haha!! yes quite so...meant to be double meaning in sorts..but i think i kept the other meaning a bit too hidden for others to notice...so kudos to u...<br /><br />i was on verge on self-doubting...<br /><br />again grossness is a personal opinion...and hence the warning...i expect none of my blog readers to find it gross...but few may...few may end up suggesting psychiatrist to me :)<br /><br />lastly, thanks a lot...and catch u sooner!!buckingfastardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05288515789173570238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-13972645898312555832011-03-22T23:36:00.338+05:302011-03-22T23:36:00.338+05:30@niti: there is stability in an unreal woman that ...@niti: there is stability in an unreal woman that is not in the volatile real one...so description can be easy...non judgemental...non sexist...easier to attempt such stuff for a mannequinbuckingfastardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05288515789173570238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-10973970925557184712011-03-22T23:32:59.539+05:302011-03-22T23:32:59.539+05:30@manisha: i never cease to amaze my handful reader...@manisha: i never cease to amaze my handful readers coz good comments never cease to elate me...and so u did...so u did very well!!<br /><br />no book is still far fetched thought for me...i think i m too lazy to even attempt that...short story is as long as it goes for mebuckingfastardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05288515789173570238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-46973731100513806702011-03-22T23:16:17.426+05:302011-03-22T23:16:17.426+05:30@bluntu: ohh u kno me too well to hope for happy e...@bluntu: ohh u kno me too well to hope for happy ending...i m too much of distorted for that!!<br /><br />it was laidback and hence was my concern if it wud be interesting enuf...if it was..i m super happy :Dbuckingfastardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05288515789173570238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-80731366009088831822011-03-22T22:55:23.117+05:302011-03-22T22:55:23.117+05:30@suruchi: I hav also come to a conclusion...i can ...@suruchi: I hav also come to a conclusion...i can never feel my post is complete until i get a loooong comment from u that makes me feel sinfully good...ohh stop flattering...(dont) :)<br /><br />The P.S are always meant to not make me a sound like story writing machine...little something abt myself is like the first comment to my story...by me...!<br /><br />and for going thru my post not once but twice...u get 2 hugs...kindly collect before they expire...morever...its always fun touching nerves...i just love nerves :P :)buckingfastardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05288515789173570238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-81276397736502459302011-03-22T18:34:29.730+05:302011-03-22T18:34:29.730+05:30@enigma: haha!! touchwood abt 2011...i cant bear 9...@enigma: haha!! touchwood abt 2011...i cant bear 9 impending dull months nyways... and cummon my stories are more of gray than dark...there is celebration of love though not long lasting i suppose :)<br /><br />and i adore u to go thru the end...especially wen ur not a fan of dark stories...see u aroundbuckingfastardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05288515789173570238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-34914377640903851812011-03-22T18:32:00.455+05:302011-03-22T18:32:00.455+05:30@writerzblock: regular love stories are not my for...@writerzblock: regular love stories are not my forte...its a common writer syndrome...the need to be cruel..and i have similar needs.<br /><br />Actually darkness of self is a very hidden personality...if one cud see the inner feelings of the regular ppl around dem...he wud say..all needs help.. yes he does needs help..so do i maybe....<br /><br />Yes the title was intentional...else "My New Queen" will be bit of a cheesy title...but strangely suits the occasion here...lovely observation..i almost thought it will go unnoticed...<br /><br />yes i find solace in words...wat worries me is my frequent need to find solace :)buckingfastardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05288515789173570238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-43461506130555078092011-03-22T18:27:47.660+05:302011-03-22T18:27:47.660+05:30@bliss: as i have discussed again and again, beaut...@bliss: as i have discussed again and again, beauty is a very personal opinion...as personal as sexuality in some terms....and love and loneliness are certainly related...but the fun part it both cannot coexist happily...i wish it could...it wud be peaceful for a changebuckingfastardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05288515789173570238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-41002622134553511802011-03-22T18:25:47.518+05:302011-03-22T18:25:47.518+05:30@nil: coming from a person who can string words be...@nil: coming from a person who can string words beautifully and who aspire me...its lovely..<br /><br />yea the errors are glaring and will work on them and edit them from next time...<br /><br />again i myself dont find it sick...and nyone wid open mind wont...but open mind is a rare element nowadays...so i dint intended to touch a nerve...though hell i dont care...!!<br /><br />thanks a lot for understanding the subtlety behind itbuckingfastardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05288515789173570238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-23157102999310584422011-03-22T18:22:34.610+05:302011-03-22T18:22:34.610+05:30@Splatters of Ink: Hey thank u loads for the kind ...@Splatters of Ink: Hey thank u loads for the kind words...abt the grammatical error, u shud see how many red underlines i get in MS-word where i write my post.... <br /><br />The errors in the conversation and soliloquy are intentional to match the thought process...coz personally i dont think or talk in proper grammar. But rest all are due to my shitty grammar skills and lack of editing...i will work on it...maybe get a Wren and Martin!!<br /><br />The idea behind the whole thing was from a conversation i had with my frnd, that if a loner falls in love wont it be with someone who cant talk, or better who cant exist apart from wen the person wants to...hence mannequin a lifeless perfection.buckingfastardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05288515789173570238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-46240715185344330042011-03-07T17:38:19.990+05:302011-03-07T17:38:19.990+05:30bold and the beautiful never meant so much, I mean...bold and the beautiful never meant so much, I mean the mannequin and of course, your way of writing!<br /><br />you surprised me ceaselessly with the way you didn't leave the reader hanging on and actually went on to divulge the culmination... that, my friend is true kindness :)<br /><br />well, something that I can't help commenting on... each dotted line separates stories that are complete in themselves, like pearls on a necklace! will come back for more.Sandiphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07382377647160173380noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-4777270725123748382011-03-06T21:53:31.435+05:302011-03-06T21:53:31.435+05:30Hey,
This comes across as something a lot more de...Hey,<br /><br />This comes across as something a lot more deeper than meets the eye (I guess.)<br /><br />It wasn't gross or sick, maybe in ideation, yeah, :P but the execution was nothing short of beautiful.<br /><br />Actually, even the ideation is not gross per say, 'distorted' maybe, like your male protagonist.<br /><br />Love and loneliness. Definitely the two most powerful emotions that can be experienced ever (anger ties with them too btw I think). And it is amazing how much these emotions can drive you. <br /><br />Anyway, who are we to define love?<br /><br />Oh did I say, this was exceptionally outstanding? :)bondgal_rulzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10742312673121060975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-73450217968000978592011-03-06T19:06:07.785+05:302011-03-06T19:06:07.785+05:30Excellent! Not many people could describe a real w...Excellent! Not many people could describe a real woman like you described an un-real one. :)Nitihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09852060249428063274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-78557479086272327782011-03-03T21:19:19.429+05:302011-03-03T21:19:19.429+05:30you never cease to amaze ur readers do you???loved...you never cease to amaze ur readers do you???loved the narration,the details,the little metaphors.<br /><br />In short loved it totally :)<br />Ever thought of writing a book?If not i suggest now is the time.manishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08814502032169705300noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-7197947558647823692011-03-02T09:22:10.263+05:302011-03-02T09:22:10.263+05:30Throughout the narration, I was wondering how it&#...Throughout the narration, I was wondering how it's gonna end. And I was wondering if there would a happily ever after, but knowing BuckingF I knew that's never gonna happen, and sure as hell as I wasn't disappointed!<br /><br />As laidback as the flow was, it still was gripping. Loved it :)Blunt Edgeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08555022660539210810noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-14085592488078694532011-02-28T23:56:17.526+05:302011-02-28T23:56:17.526+05:30Okay..i have come to a conclusion...i can never &q...Okay..i have come to a conclusion...i can never "not like" your posts...you can never "not touch a nerve" with what you write.<br /><br />i loved this one too...<br />i first read the P.S....coz i wanted to know what you had to say about this...it's kinda your habit n also kinda mine now...expecting the P.S's and almost anticipating them with a thrill:-)<br /><br />i loved some of the expressions so much that you Mr. Bf made me go through that long write up all over again to find them*does that sound as complaining...it isn't:-)*<br /><br />"people are scared of being insignificant"<br />"he wanted her, he wanted to earn her"<br />"rain splattering like the angry knock of the landlord"<br />"his eyes closed in the kiss so that she cannot judge him"<br />sooooooooooo many more...<br /><br />absolutely brilliant...makes me glare at you angrily again for not writing more...<br />and never mind if you are the sunset kinda person..as long as a sun is involved...there's a ray of light;-)Suruchihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08352785820589232058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-32047366895036021042011-02-28T23:48:20.268+05:302011-02-28T23:48:20.268+05:30hey hey... did u say 2011 isn't that great??? ...hey hey... did u say 2011 isn't that great??? dude u ve just reached some great heights there i can see (oops!-'read'). the description, the picture and obviously the title ( which takes away the crown)... everything was so well written and never lost its flow....though am not a fan of dark stories but surprisingly your dark stories , as i ve mentioned earlier, ve their own celebrations and i enjoy them thoroughly... gud<br />one once again!<br /><br />ps.yes u shud definitely like me ;)AnicAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16900598058936147303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-54526013799264173522011-02-28T18:59:54.629+05:302011-02-28T18:59:54.629+05:30Btw, was the title intentional? Mannequin to My Ne...Btw, was the title intentional? Mannequin to My New Queen?<br />:-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-77221875871551658992011-02-28T18:50:24.880+05:302011-02-28T18:50:24.880+05:30At first I thought it was going to be a regular lo...At first I thought it was going to be a regular love story, and I'm actually glad it did not turn out that way. Very interesting. Dark sort of character, this guy seems to be. Weird, definitely. I would say, he needs help. Or love, perhaps. <br /><br />Everybody lives a lonely life. He/she may be surrounded by people, and yet not be able to make that 'connection' with another person, but going to destructive extremes indicates some help is needed.<br /><br />Liked your way of writing. I hope you find solace through your words.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-34649749350849682672011-02-28T16:56:25.814+05:302011-02-28T16:56:25.814+05:30'beauty dies in eyes of beholder' - cudnt ...'beauty dies in eyes of beholder' - cudnt agree more. <br />you know, love and loneliness arent too different, if you look at it in a certain way. there is hardly any love without the sense of loneliness and there is hardly any loneliness that is not inspired by love. so perhaps when you say those are two of your fav emotions, you are referring to one alone perhaps.blisshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06071846717735903246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-72930333075097900162011-02-28T15:14:22.953+05:302011-02-28T15:14:22.953+05:30I have to agree^.
The idea behind it was bautiful...I have to agree^.<br /><br />The idea behind it was bautiful. To be honest, I crave for good work on Blogger, most of the blogs hardly intrigue or influence me. There was nothing sick about this, I beg to differ.<br />I think it was an extremely bold approach and that's something you should be proud of.<br /><br />Yes, there are some errors.. Give it another read and I'm sure that'll be fixed :)<br /><br />But this was perhaps one of the best stuff I've read on your blog. Actually, the best one :-)<br /><br />Good job man, hell of a good job.nilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12055067396258349246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-39318984497396400742011-02-28T13:06:30.059+05:302011-02-28T13:06:30.059+05:30I read the entire post.
I must say that it was ve...I read the entire post.<br /><br />I must say that it was very well written. It was interesting. You had my eyes glued to the screen, scrolling down as fast as possible, because I really wanted to read the end.<br /><br />However, there are more than a few grammatical errors. Go through the post once and you'll notice. =)<br /><br />Nevertheless, this is something different. And you have succeeded in creating the same images that you had imagined while writing this. Or so I'd like to believe.<br /><br />I really want to know where you got the idea.Splatters Of Inkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16719915078634377065noreply@blogger.com