tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post8444381082245261504..comments2023-06-16T17:07:08.031+05:30Comments on Tears n' Rain: A stranger, an old whore and a city to diebuckingfastardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05288515789173570238noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-24961441639912092422010-10-31T05:28:01.812+05:302010-10-31T05:28:01.812+05:30@Arshat: coming from an author himself, you know h...@Arshat: coming from an author himself, you know how precious this compliment is!!<br /><br />I guess i already failed at the part of being regular...bt am trying my level best<br /><br />@Surreal: nice having u back here!! thankz..the whole point was to make it sound believable and its a relief to know it was!buckingfastardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05288515789173570238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-64639436578703946672010-10-31T05:25:53.286+05:302010-10-31T05:25:53.286+05:30@westwind: hey! never mind, even i am very irregul...@westwind: hey! never mind, even i am very irregular these days...so sorry fr late reply<br /><br />Yea i guess now i kno i gave away the ending too soon...coz i was trying to uncomplicate it fr the readers...<br /><br />totally agree with u for the fact that the end is not the only good part of a good story :)buckingfastardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05288515789173570238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-23795348435679570682010-10-31T05:23:11.010+05:302010-10-31T05:23:11.010+05:30@Arnav: Sorry for the late reply!! i was off my bl...@Arnav: Sorry for the late reply!! i was off my blog!! <br /><br />Thank u soo much and thankfully it dint lost ur interest midway wich was one of my main concern!!<br /><br />I appreciate u being blunt..that seriosly helps...but i hav explained my perspective in an earlier comment!buckingfastardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05288515789173570238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-92069388981484041732010-10-28T13:22:46.139+05:302010-10-28T13:22:46.139+05:30I loved your new style, where the narrator seems t...I loved your new style, where the narrator seems to be a part of the story. Loved the story too. It looks very real. :)Shrutihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18160009112521623645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-42257840155602261742010-10-06T03:21:05.027+05:302010-10-06T03:21:05.027+05:30You are a master at telling stories... It is a gif...You are a master at telling stories... It is a gift.. <br />Please do write more often. :)Arshat Chaudharyhttp://www.arshatchaudhary.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-52287019908137921272010-09-27T20:33:20.505+05:302010-09-27T20:33:20.505+05:30First of all Hi.. I m back here after a long long ...First of all Hi.. I m back here after a long long time.<br />Good to see a post from you. Nice scheme, great narration. I agree with most of the people that it was predictable.. but to enjoy a story it isnt always necessary that it should be unpredictable.. Just savoring the flavor is great too.. <br />As for the vampire part.. I think it was nothing like Twilight.. there was frenzy love affair :P<br />I think it was a great storyline.. and I loved it how you paid attention to every little detail..<br />I complaint however is that.. it ended too soon :P<br />On a serious note, I think there is no major shortcoming here, other than the fact that you could have twisted it a little bit in a way that it would have been more mysterious for the reader.. (my mind playing games)The West Windhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08284244734112046605noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-91294609979690589642010-09-25T16:06:14.224+05:302010-09-25T16:06:14.224+05:30Good narration , as already said very captivating ...Good narration , as already said very captivating beginning ..Till the middle of the post , I was completely engrossed , the end could have been different.. Like some one suggested crazy murder of some sort would have been better . <br />Apologies if I am being blunt but I am just giving my honest opinion :)Arnavhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09090214924365208584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-73356679705371785842010-09-24T19:41:31.983+05:302010-09-24T19:41:31.983+05:30Thanks for the lovel yreply.. No its same day as y...Thanks for the lovel yreply.. No its same day as yours here too.. i made a joke in your story it says Monday night and the post came on tuesday :) thats all .. <br /><br />I am jsut 5:30 hrs behind your time :) thats all <br /><br />BikramBikramjit Singh Mannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18313466956044935335noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-75686574618740396472010-09-22T01:08:27.669+05:302010-09-22T01:08:27.669+05:30@sm:thanks :D and welcome!!
@bebo: glad u liked....@sm:thanks :D and welcome!!<br /><br />@bebo: glad u liked...welcome to my blog too :)buckingfastardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05288515789173570238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-63570193737975110102010-09-22T01:07:19.853+05:302010-09-22T01:07:19.853+05:30@unruly rebel: hey welcome to my blog!!! :D and th...@unruly rebel: hey welcome to my blog!!! :D and thnks for liking it soo much...makes my day seriously :)<br /><br />yea abt that white background...actually my background image server is not down...hence it was showing white...hope i get it all fixed in few days!!!<br /><br />yea..length has been a problem with my fictions...but trust me i too hate loong fictions and try to keep it as short as required :)buckingfastardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05288515789173570238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-18287766919914153722010-09-21T23:44:52.162+05:302010-09-21T23:44:52.162+05:30@pal: thanks!! and welcome to my blog!! :D
@enigm...@pal: thanks!! and welcome to my blog!! :D<br /><br />@enigma: haha...thnks for the over the top praises...and yes..i plan to keep playing with words...dey are pretty helpful :)buckingfastardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05288515789173570238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-36311405439469037422010-09-21T23:42:58.524+05:302010-09-21T23:42:58.524+05:30@dee: VAMPIRE DIARIES....ohh yes i AM judging u......@dee: VAMPIRE DIARIES....ohh yes i AM judging u...but anyways for each his/her own :P<br /><br />i love to imagine my characters and so want to convey that image to my readers...if i did that..i m happy<br /><br />abt dat vampire part...i answered it already :)buckingfastardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05288515789173570238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-1727751813939402352010-09-21T23:40:19.000+05:302010-09-21T23:40:19.000+05:30@madhu: "brutally well" just the adjecti...@madhu: "brutally well" just the adjective i was waiting for...goes totally with my feelings atleast :D<br /><br />my one fiction reminds u of my another fiction....tell u dats one helluva honour to deal with...thnkss!!buckingfastardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05288515789173570238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-19595391735336687162010-09-21T23:38:18.045+05:302010-09-21T23:38:18.045+05:30@blunt bro: ohh calcutta is a surreal place alrigh...@blunt bro: ohh calcutta is a surreal place alright atleast for me...means u have to love the dirt and filth to see the beauty under it :)<br /><br />and abt that vampire part...i hope o answered ur query in annie's reply !!buckingfastardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05288515789173570238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-47189105119403250492010-09-21T23:36:09.076+05:302010-09-21T23:36:09.076+05:30@bikramjit: thank you loads for liking it :)
well...@bikramjit: thank you loads for liking it :)<br /><br />well feelings of my protagonist is pretty much my feelings...so it does not makes u sound cruel...atleast to me...dunno abt others...we are in the same boat man!!<br /><br />thankgod...the sarcasm was not too over the top nor too bland!! <br /><br />BTW...is it tuesday dat side...for us its monday :P<br /><br />it is a bliss to have comments praising efforts...it has done more than justice....buckingfastardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05288515789173570238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-28911690292237603512010-09-21T23:32:20.000+05:302010-09-21T23:32:20.000+05:30@suruchi: OHH i m not afraid of being judged....ju...@suruchi: OHH i m not afraid of being judged....just of being falsely judged :/<br /><br />naah!!! i cant change my writing style...but i felt awkward coz i changed my story telling style...and it feels same as before to u...dan its a huge compliment for me for all i care!! :D<br /><br />soo thanks for loooving it...and yea...trying hard to get an active ass!!! :P<br /><br /><br />shhh...the intricate knowledge of chiffon and lipstick comes from the creepy stalking dat i do around the city in terms of research!!!buckingfastardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05288515789173570238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-66934449524504129582010-09-21T23:27:06.528+05:302010-09-21T23:27:06.528+05:30@bondgal: ohh cummon....u can say it was inspired ...@bondgal: ohh cummon....u can say it was inspired from dracula...inspired from "interview with a vampire" but not at all from TWILIGHT...where is the link...my vampire is not even goodlooking sparkler!!!buckingfastardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05288515789173570238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-59284187754542752662010-09-21T23:25:04.614+05:302010-09-21T23:25:04.614+05:30@annie and all with same disappointments:
annie!...@annie and all with same disappointments: <br /><br />annie!! thank u...thank u....and thank u loads...ur critique seriously helped a lot!!<br /><br />actually my fault was i mentioned the word "vampire" at the end of my story...which i dint anywhere thruout...he necessarily is not a vampire...but i just wanted to potray him as something else than human....coz if he was a human...however deranged he be...he could not see how pitiful humanity is....so just to portray the abnormality of humanity...i made my protagonist something non-human...and i imagined him to be vampire..<br /><br />i guess i could convey that meaning in my story...and thanks for pointing out that shortcoming...will help me keep it in mind next time :)buckingfastardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05288515789173570238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-30273415013711759142010-09-21T09:03:58.239+05:302010-09-21T09:03:58.239+05:30I like :-)I like :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02080615971396963687noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-89567088948473037472010-09-20T16:27:27.969+05:302010-09-20T16:27:27.969+05:30well writtenwell writtensmhttp://realityviews.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-64098377239462204382010-09-18T03:15:30.929+05:302010-09-18T03:15:30.929+05:30well well...i am first time visitor on your blog, ...well well...i am first time visitor on your blog, i just liked it too much and i mean it wen i say too much...just a opinion in case you dont mind,change the color of font, its too dull to eyes (homo sapien eyes i insist)<br />and your bloger name its just f*ckin owsom... :)<br />and yeah baout the post, was a bit long but was damn interestin, you dont miss even the slightest of details... :)<br /><br /><br />Namit,<br />My SPacE- <a href="http://i-am-a-man-namit.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Wen i was a boy</a>Unruly Rebelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01442558374746480482noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-68070973048789036722010-09-17T23:20:15.414+05:302010-09-17T23:20:15.414+05:30u knw wht... ur first paragraph was so captivating...u knw wht... ur first paragraph was so captivating that u win the prize in the first para itself... and then the story... it was definitely a gud attempt... calcutta in your words as usual was again gripping.... and u have an art.... u can play with words....keep playing!!!AnicAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16900598058936147303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-82125460091958585892010-09-17T19:26:18.769+05:302010-09-17T19:26:18.769+05:30Good attempt. Can see power in your words. Keep wr...Good attempt. Can see power in your words. Keep writing.palhttp://writerzblock.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-7124318225227584392010-09-17T12:49:35.832+05:302010-09-17T12:49:35.832+05:30I read this straight after seeing an episode of &q...I read this straight after seeing an episode of "Vampire Diaries" [don't judge me!!]. The vampire part was predictable, and as ice maiden and blunt edges said, I was hoping the guy would be anything but a vampire!<br /><br />That aside, I love the way your words can provide the reader with such rich visual imagery. Good job!missydeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01788827285518215761noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-689133061348705827.post-2687991160223677922010-09-17T11:25:08.133+05:302010-09-17T11:25:08.133+05:30hey..u did this utterly brutally well {though the ...hey..u did this utterly brutally well {though the adjectives do not go with my feeling..:P] Calcutta at its best..u know?? Even now, the word clacutta reminds me about that bride u had written about..:)<br /><br />U rock mister...Hnds down!Madhuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12169330042435906891noreply@blogger.com